Tuesday, July 19, 2011
Do you like my book idea?
okay my book is about two charecters who I need help on thier names. There is this kid called Aaron who is a reguler kid,until a meteor crashes on earth and he gets the power to move things with his mind. He tries to keep his powers a secret but he cant. anyway other people like him track him down because they need an armyof superhumans. He is recuted by the wrong side (the people who want to kill the humans) and he is taken to a secret base in tThe medaterranian. A superhuman called ghost protical (ghost protical can turn invisible,go trough walls,and teleport) so he is taken to a place where the good guys are (the people who want to protect the humans) and he learns how to fight. Im stuck at there. I need some feedback on how I can improve it (also while at the bad guys base he learns that they are going to launch an attack on the goverment of America first, also the reason the bad guys hate the humans is because they think that humans dont deserve to live because they dont have any powers) so what do you think and can you help me find a code name for ausitn.
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